rate_review Reviews

come on write! its very good and i just love the story line so far. Please Write!

Another thing. Stop trying to rush it. You are rushing the story and that is definatley something you dont want to do. It makes it sound stupid. But I cant help but love the storyline so dont ruin it.

keep on writing, though i suggest you write your chapters a little bit longer but other than that, your story is really interesting so far:D

I read your reviews, Rachie isn't flamming you, i agree with her, check you spelling and grammar and write a little longer and people will you leave you great reviews. I love it when people flame me cause i do get personal with them and it helps me write better. It's a good start but I'll keep reading, I try to at least read five chapters but so far.....

I didnt flame you. A flame is someone saying that your fic is down-right terrible which it isnt. I am enjoying it and am keeping up with the updates. I say check your spelling because people take it more seriously is you use proper spelling. This IS a story. And the longer chapter thing you dont even need to worry about if you update very frequently. It is good to have constructive critism. Thats very different from a flame and should be welcomed. I only review fics when I really like them and I have something of importance to say. Reviews saying "OMG I love you story" just mean exactly what they say and they are trying to encourage you to keep updating. But you learn nothing from them. I have problems with my fic too. I am still a novice. I have trouble with updating and chapter lengths. But what I said to you was no flame. I am really enjoying your fic so if construcive critism that will help you in the long run discourages you. I will stop reviewing if you would like. I am sorry you feel like I am flaming you. Please update again soon!

this is pretty good but check your spelling more and why does girls bunk with boys?

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO PLEASE WRITE MORE I CAN"T TAKE IT I WANT TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i like it >.< is funny >.< anywho keep the chapters coming plz!!!! =^-^=

Ok, I really like your idea. But you really need to write at least a little bit longer chapters and use spell check. You are worse in those categories than me and thats definatley not something to strive for! ^_^; But yeah. If you just do those two things and don't do anything to corny than this will definatley be a fic I will adore!