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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I WANTED TOREAD UR STORYBUT ITS NOT LETTING ME SO YAH
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January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wooww it was amazing... write more chapters it's really good
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome! very original and kinky.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very enjoyable, werid, but enjoyable. Keep up the great work. Loved it all. I'm werid and I know it. Can't wait until the next chapter is up.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! HOOOOT! PLEASE WRITE MORE! MUCH MORE!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...O_O I'm...speechless...I...don't know...what to....say....exept: DO MORE!
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You certainly weren't kidding about the crazy part! I'll never look at a rat the same way again! o_O Quite original, and I liked the choppy style. Very 'of-the-moment'. Yeah, it's beyond freak-nasty and definitely something reserved for HBO's 'Real Sex', but I say bring it.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, your story needs A LOT of work, its rough, and is unstructured, and should probably be edited, or rrevised. it could be interesting though....
but it needs work.
but it needs work.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is really really good, keep up the good work. : P