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Mmm, so hot. And believable, too!

Wow. Certainly took me by surprise! I wasn't exactly thinking of anything inparticular, but this works perfectly. Nice one!

Ooooh. I Liked this. It's a very interesting pairing I have never seen before now. And being hot is definetly a plus. :D You're writing style is actually quite believable and is very enjoyable. The only thing that annoyed me was the use of ' for quotation marks. But that is obviously just a personal perference, I imagine, and it is easy to let it slide. Just for this, I am going to check out your author page. :) Oh yeah, that's right. ;) Let's see what else you got.

Keep it up!

Ah, yes, the spelling also annoyed me as well. ^_^;; I believe you got Toran right, though I'm not sure, but I guess it doesn't even matter since hse isn't in this fic.

Ciao. :)

really good. btw, her name is spelled 'Karan' this isn't a flame. just thought you oughta know. bye!