schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good! But...more use of pharagraphs would be nice!
It was really good anyway!
It was really good anyway!
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Talking"
'Thinking'
Okay?
BTW: Cool story so far!
'Thinking'
Okay?
BTW: Cool story so far!
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good, but u need a disclaimer or the story will be deleted or somethin...
schedule
January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"....."- Please use quotes and maybe I will write a real reviews