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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad man, maybe try to explain just how the military found out about the demons. That part was very vague. Otherwise I like it. Keep up the good work
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey I just wanted to tell you that I really like the idea of this story. I hope you update soon.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It is a pretty good start and I do hope that you will continue with it. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story alot, please don't stop writing.