rate_review Reviews

hey i think the story was great! the lemon was good and all. thumbs ^ i think it was good, u had enough detail 2 keep it sweet. i hope for more stories from u soon! ^_^

For your first lemon, that was awsome! In time I'm sure you will become much better (not saying your not good now or anything). I can't wait to read other stories you have. Oh and lol, I didn't know a dogs thing did THAT! Lol not only was your story great it was educational! Which is a good thing, bunch a pervs who read from this sight and they could use some education! (lol I mean) Well keep up the good work! IM when you have a new story out or if you just want to talk. I dont care which one. PEACE!

I thought it was pretty good for a first time. Good job. I don't know about the song....maybe if you would have made it clear it was a song and broke it up throughout the chapter....but then again that is just how I like my songfics.

Hi! I would like you to know that I have read this story a few times and I just cant get enough of it! I hope you will continue towrite more chapters and yes I would also like to say that you portraied the two of them -Kagome and Inuyasha- Pritty well! :-)

TTFN;
Megan

Wow! This was a really good story! I can't wait to read your next ones ^_^!!
- rin.dee