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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luv the first chapter. sess is very sess. i enjoyed that your vocabulary is more extensive and better utilized than i usually see in fan fics:)
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May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Luv the new chapter. Usually i dont like it when the same scene is done twice using changing POV's. but damn you did that really well and even though i had just read the first chapter. it was fresh interesting and not a retelling of the exact information. in reference to the A/N I acually didn't find Kagome to be acting high school at all and that also was a really great change!!
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April 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gosh gosh gosh gosh gosh... it's just the first chapter but it's as exciting and interesting as hell!!! plzzz update as soon as ur sched permits it...plz!! and can u email me once u updated?(mz_devilish_actz69@yahoo.com) plzzz.... i would be so grateful if u did... but if u find it a bit troublesome then it's okie... ja