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Chapter 16 wasn't the end.
Wow.
Somehow..when first read this I missed that whole this isn't the end bit. Instead I was too busy sobbing.
Congratulations on getting to a reader so well.
~WD

PLEASE UPADTE SOON!!!!!!! INU MUST LIVE FOR HIS KIDS, FOR SESSHOMARU!!!!

I started not to read your story because it was not complete, but I am so glad I caved and read it anyway. Youe story touched me so that I can barely see the keys on my keyboard because of the tears. You are an excellent writer and I would read your stories anytime. Please, if you are still looking here for reviews, Please finish this story I beg of you!

please for the love of Kama update!!! or else I'm going to tell Nikkie23534 on you!. lol
no seriously this is a really good fic update on all the sites you post at K. :)

shivonne aka ladytokyo

i have shead tears over other fics.....but, i never cried so hard as i am now. this has to be the most touching story i have ever read.
please..please..you must add one last chapter so i can cry with happiness and not sorrow.
your story is the best love story i have ever read and it needs a happy ending...please!
just one last chapter!

READ ALL 17 CHAPTERS IN A MATTER OF 3 HOURS TODAY- NEEDED A LITTLE BREAK, SORRY.. oK... MORE PLEASE.. HAVE TO SEE HOW INUYASHA GETS OUT OF THIS ONE, AND SESSHOMARU GETS HIM BACK... PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

I'm really happy that you continued to write on this story.
I cried my heart out when I read chapter 16

I LOVE IT PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! My god you are an amazing writer I love your story it is so intense. I never write a review till i have read all the chapters and I love this story. It is full of intrigue and there is a great plot. You need to write a book and publish it. I love all the twists and turns, and I like how you made all the important characters i.e. Kouga realize that his obsession was wrong. I like how you did that. I love Sesshoumaru in this, you are so indepth with is character. This is an amazing story. There isn't too much angst so I like that, they is joy, happieness, and love, also a down side so that's great. I love the ending with Sango and Miroku and how he (Inuyasha) is not supposed to be there. I like that Sesshoumaru is FINALLY using his brain, so that makes me happy.

This whole story makes me happy. I story that is fully worthy to be read, so thank you so much for writing it and putting so much effort into the story line. The children are an amazing touch, and the different aspects of each othe sesshounaru and inuyasha's characters are reveiled in the children. This is a great story, (i keep repeating myself lol) And it is great, you are a great writer and I really can't wait for you to write the next installment in this story

Thank you so much for writing this
Shohunky

Ack! I can't believe you've been off reading HP fandom instead of updating. What have you been thinkin?

Anyway, I'm glad you finally decided to update. Excellent work! I can't believe that Inuyasha is not suppose die. What the heck happen?

Please update soon!

Nemesis ^_~

nice. looking forward to see how they bring him back. no more crying for a while please.