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It is interesting but I bet it will get better as you finish

I started not to read this - I am not into male/male stuff - but this was pretty good. A whole new veiw on InuYasha's and Kagome's relationship! It's interesting and I hope some new chapters will be shortly forthcoming! (NOTE: Please check up on spelling, grammar, and punctuation - it makes for easier reading!)

poor inuyasha im glad sess can just in time .. please please please please update soon i would love to read more

angel

Kick butt story, why the extendedly long waits between chapters? i'm a lurker i read & enjoy, as i thought you wrote for personally enjoyment & sharing. fitting pen name though, how about some much needed blood letting, of one my favorite authors to encourage you to update more frequently, hmmmm? now get those creative juices flowing & update ;)

Wow! Absolutely fantastic, truly one of the best stories I have ever written. I love this story so much. You have a great talent for writing and your creativity is amazing. I never once thought I would get to read a story where Sesshoumaru writes InuYasha a letter stating that he is sorry. It was enchanting and fabulous, I loved it.

Coming up with that was pure, raw genius. I can’t wait to see what happens next. The story is progressing at a great rate. And there are little to no spelling errors and I can understand the story quite well.

How ever, yes the dreaded how ever. I know the characters are out of character. It does help your story. But, I don’t understand why you had to make Kagome like you did. Do you not like her? Or did you think it would make your story better? I can honestly say it does take away from your story.

You could have a more successful and profound story if Kagome had a big personality change. I don’t know that is the only thing I didn’t like. *Maniacal Laugh* Sesshoumaru and InuYasha have cramps. I laughed really hard when reading that. Now they know how it feels like.

Other than that, you have a well written and successful story. I can’t wait to see what happens. Please update soon, I can’t wait to see what happens. I love this story; it is such a good story.

bi

Sorry when I said best story I have ever written I mean't read. Sorry again :)

wow that was great .. i love it .... i cant wait in till you update next i hope it si soon ... i hope you have fun on your vacation ..later for now

angel

*is on edge of seat* hurry and update soon! i so wanna see what happens! ahh i cant stand it.

Well you've certainly caught my attention... Great work so far! Is Sesshomaru going to bottom? *prays* Anyway, hope to see an update! Loving this story so far!

- DF

i like so far, u sould contue!1