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plz update soon =)

Hello ! I'm very pleased that you enjoyed the wonderful story of Rasberries and that you are writing something in the same look. Your original character is interesting, even if I find her a little cold : I would like that you described a little more her thoughts and emotions in reaction with Sesshoumaru. He is well determined in the story (for a slave, of course ^_^). I wait the explanations about her and her special reactions...
Thank you for you rich vocabulary and your grammar ! Though I'm french, I highly appreciate good language without faults !!!
A bientôt,

Merely Truth