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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...that was just so wrong! What a suspenseful place for a cliffy! Gotta read more of this. Good story, though!
I hope she is okay...
I hope she is okay...
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What? The doctors knew it was a youkai's child? How?
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my freaking god. You can not leave me in suspence like this. i must know what happens next. more explaination on the blood baby part.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... More please
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more...Sad...I hope things will get better..
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I am a sucker for happy endings though. Reality is just too filled with sadness as it is & giving this very beautiful story a happy ending would be very thoughfull. I hope you can find it in your heart to at least write one more chapter & make this a love conquers all ending. I know I sound scary right now but let us blame it on my PMSing hormones!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how could you end it there for that ch. evil person you are!!!!!! lol i love the story so far.. very good images and yada yada... UPDATE SOON!! or i'll start stalking you..jk wow..im insane
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**Written as of Chapter 10 (End)**
Very sad, very unexpected ending =[ I didn't really expect her to die...
Still, a very touching way to end a story.
Very sad, very unexpected ending =[ I didn't really expect her to die...
Still, a very touching way to end a story.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, that's certainly the most painful cliffhanger I've read in a while! (mimes self-strangulation) Agh! Well, I'm not sorry to see his office go, though I Am looking forward to him getting a clue that she was never out to use him. I REAAAAAAAALLLLY am looking forward to what the beginning of the next chapter brings! Don't be long! Don't be a stranger! RSVP! SOS (Save our Sanity), AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!!!
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! that was a bit unexspected i can wait for the next chapter!!! so far this is my favorite story i am reading right now.