rate_review Reviews

OMFG! You don't have to ask for reviews. That was unbelievable. Not only was it incredibly hot, but there was something that I can't describe. The hunt, the slow torture, the intensity...fucking fantabulous. On top of that, it is intriguing, leaving one wondering how the two will meet again and what will happen. I am left breathless and satisfied...erm, intellectually. Great writing.

I anxiously await your next chapter. Just a side note; I make it a policy not to review fics where the author blackmails readers into reviewing, but I couldn't help it. You are the first.

Snow

whats next
please update soon

Oh how evil to leave it on a cliffie! Please update soon! Story is great!!!!!!!

Please continue this story!

I love it! What a mean place to stop ;)

Is this a chapter/review ransom -_- ? To even make a reader wait for the rest of this story is not only cruelty but a dishonor to your fellow author/cliffhanger-leavers(not a word). |WRITE MORE.| Your Good. Seriously, Keep it up... Maybe you should write this stuff for a living.

reaaly good. it builds up tp a great cliffhanger.

its grat please please updett soon

YES . . . PUT MORE . . . I wanna read more . . . it is very good . . . there were a few spelling errors . . . but other than that the story is great . . . positively wonderful . . .