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I am liking this so far. I look forward to your next chapter.

noooo! please add a disclaimer! I read the first chap of this fic a while back and it was GREAT!!! *sob* stupid TOS

oh my gosh! please please PLEASE don't stop this story!! please finish it!! i know you have a life outside of this, but it's soooooooo UNBEARABLE when someone starts a really great story and then they never finish it TT_TT this is SUCH a great and unexpected story!! You're doing an AWESOME job!! i'll love you forever if you keep updating!!!!!

Your story is good so far, however, while you seem to be editing occasionally, you have not updated in a long while. Have you abandoned this story, or will you be adding to is it in the near future?

i am not usually one for the angst but this story has touched me. please, if you are going to update please do so. every time i see this on the 'latest' list my heart twists when i only see the chapter indicating there is still only seven chapters.

i usually try to read waffy fluff and when i become emotionally invested in something different i would appreciate seeing it to a happy completion. i just want a happy ending!

i have chocolate?

thank you,
ginny

i hope you aren't holding back because of the inability of some people on aff-dot-net to review. there are quite a few wonderful authors who have to suffer the lack of recognition and feedback. a few have only one or two reviews per chapter and i'm sure it gets frustrating, some have posted their work on more than one site therefore obtaining a larger audience with incerased exposure.

this is a unique and intreging piece, even if i was the only one reading it, your story would have a loyal following even if it was just me.

i am looking forward to reading future installments.

thank you,
ginny

This looks to be a great story so far. I look forward to character developments and what exactly is in store for everyone to come. Keep up the great work.

i like the 'youko kurama' look on a fox youkai but other than that,great story!

the angst and depression is palpable. i hope she can lighten up a bit... my two children's father killed himself when my youngest was three and i was in depression for almost a year, i don't think i would have lasted for twelve years of it.

thank you,
ginny

My, you are good! You are so good that you made me cry, actually burst into tears. I hate angst, but it gives edge to the story. I love how you have depicted Shippo's matured character. Your writing is also very flowing and poetic at some points. Very touchy stuff. Keep going. :)

Alright first off... I love this story. Second thing is it's kinda hard to understand everything, well some of the stuff like what just happened in this chapter and the last. Other than that I think it's great.