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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i just started the story and i love it.what is shippo gonna do next? PLLLzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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February 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Best Shippo fic I have ever read!!!!!!!!!!
There are still some gammar mistakes but other the that
great work.
There are still some gammar mistakes but other the that
great work.
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July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is by and large one of the best stories I have ever read. Please tell me you are not discontinuing it. I hafta know how it ends, now that you've got me hooked!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. this is a story that is very well written .i spotted a few typos but is the only thing i can complain about.this story is beleivable.
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February 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How does the fox intend to tell the dog demon that his daughter bit him 2 inches from his nut sack and better still-- what will Inuyasha DO to him? To her???
I'm simply addictedto this story and I can't get enough!! Please write a bit more, I'm dying to see what kind of father Inuyasha makes as well as what happens to Chiyoke and Shippo *hops*
I'm simply addictedto this story and I can't get enough!! Please write a bit more, I'm dying to see what kind of father Inuyasha makes as well as what happens to Chiyoke and Shippo *hops*
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January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love! Shippo lust! Ohh the richness of the plot *swims in it* I looooove it! Pleasse update soon!
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story so far. keep up the good work. Also are their gonna be any lemons between inuyasha and kagome in the story. i know the story's based on shippo and chiyoko but my friends and i were just wondering.
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just when I was getting into it you ended it. Your evil for leaving us hanging like that. And boy is Chiyoko mean. That really was a low blow her telling him he must be sorry in bed. I beat that must have hurt more then her beating him up. It was also really sweet how he just let her beat him up, I don't know many men who would just stick around and take that kind of beating. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I know too lazy to sign in. Thank you for your beautiful review on Betrayal's Gift I truly am grateful for your words. I hope to see you on my reviews again.
Now for u'r story: Man can she be mean when she's youkai...but then again who's ha daddy? That's right. I wonder can he control her youkai???? Maybe he should have left her alone it looks like she can eat him for a snack...he's only a little fox youkai after all if she can pick him up by his bloody face :) Anyway, can't wait to see how he calms her beasty.
Now for u'r story: Man can she be mean when she's youkai...but then again who's ha daddy? That's right. I wonder can he control her youkai???? Maybe he should have left her alone it looks like she can eat him for a snack...he's only a little fox youkai after all if she can pick him up by his bloody face :) Anyway, can't wait to see how he calms her beasty.
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December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so I saw that you posted right...but tell me why have I already read this chapter???? HUH????? You tricked me that you did.