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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! Please update soon, It's a great story!~ B reading U!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to log in right now. lol I love this story! More soon please!
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October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The concept is interesting, but the story is very rough. You misspell "slave" as "salve" about half the time. Also, your Inuyasha is totally OOC. Just cuz you want him as the Uke doesn't mean he has to be a totally helpless wimp.