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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow.
How can you think to not put a second chapter up? How can you not make a lengthy story out of this? It's amazing, absolutely amazing.
But then again, some things are better left on their own, right? I think this might be one of them, depending on how well the story flows into a second and possibly third slash more chapters.
I liked how you switched between Kagome and Sesshoumaru the whole time, but I think you might have used a bit too much description in the beginning. Sesshoumaru's eyes, for one: there was just a bit too much going on there, but otherwise, I don't think I can find any fault. =D
Anyways, can I ask who drew the picture? (I really like it, by the way. The only thing I can think of is that it doesn't quite portray the emotion that your story does.)
~ Dani
How can you think to not put a second chapter up? How can you not make a lengthy story out of this? It's amazing, absolutely amazing.
But then again, some things are better left on their own, right? I think this might be one of them, depending on how well the story flows into a second and possibly third slash more chapters.
I liked how you switched between Kagome and Sesshoumaru the whole time, but I think you might have used a bit too much description in the beginning. Sesshoumaru's eyes, for one: there was just a bit too much going on there, but otherwise, I don't think I can find any fault. =D
Anyways, can I ask who drew the picture? (I really like it, by the way. The only thing I can think of is that it doesn't quite portray the emotion that your story does.)
~ Dani
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February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omgosh! That was...amazing!
So well written!
It cannot end like that!
Hopefully theres another
chapter coming soon!
Again, freaking amazing!
10/10
So well written!
It cannot end like that!
Hopefully theres another
chapter coming soon!
Again, freaking amazing!
10/10
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January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!!!!! Please up-date!!!!
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March 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey your story is quite intense, in a really alluring sense. hey i hope that you do write the other chapter. haha quite a story indeed.
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March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAV TO ADD ANOTHER CHAPTER!! this is sooo good!! i luv it!
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February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oph my god that was so awesome.. please hurry up and update..
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January 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice this story is to great to leave it as a one-shot its already been a month I hope you havn't forgotten about this story please continue it.
Arry
Arry
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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank You!!!
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December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT AND I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!! SO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAAAA i WANT mORE