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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need to fix your first chapter cuz the first and the second are the same
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story is great but something happened to your first chapter and it was replaced by your second chapter. I had already read the first chapter before so I wan't completely lost but it'd be nice to be able to read it all. This is a very interesting plot and I'd love to see where your going with it.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ummm, not trying to sound like a person complaining...but...you posted same chapter twice >___<
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Looks interesting. Will come back when you post the correct chapters.
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS GOOD!! CONTINUE TO WRITE...oh and watch out for careless mistakes; try reading outloud once finished...you'll catche them...(.^_^.)
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really good too!!!! I can't wait to see what happens between the two!! Another great job!!!! :)