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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the 1st chapter. Really looking forward to what follows, soooon, please.
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
plexcuse my language but...
HELL YES CONTINUE IT, THIS IS REALLY COOL AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE SOME MORE!!
HELL YES CONTINUE IT, THIS IS REALLY COOL AND I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE SOME MORE!!
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The beginning reads well, but once I got to the exchange on AIM between Inuyasha and his Taisho, I became a little wary and uninterested. The conversation seemed kinda unrealistic and gay in a bad way (Sesshomaru types "raises his brow"? I didn't think the guy put that much thought into how his face morphs when he's skeptical). I don't know if some parts are meant to sound OOC, but if that's what you're going for, s'ok.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this AU-fic... LOL! This is going great! I can't wait to see how you're going to work this!
Plus that Kendo Match will be interesting! *snorts* Figures that Sesshy would be an honor student *roles eyes*
Great first chap! Keep it up!
Vron
Plus that Kendo Match will be interesting! *snorts* Figures that Sesshy would be an honor student *roles eyes*
Great first chap! Keep it up!
Vron
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry I can't leave a longer review I have to leave for work. Please continue this! I love school fics and this one looks extremely interesting! I can't wait to read the next chapter. You might want to spell check, but other than a few misspelled words I saw nothing else as a problem. Keep up the great work and I do hope you update soon!
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please this is a great start continue.
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Please continue! ^.^
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January 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awsome so far! Seems like a fun-filled adventure waiting to happen! Keep up the great work!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes you should continue! You've got a great start, im very excited to see whats going to happen next!
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!YES YES YES YES YESSSSSSSS!!PLEASE KEEP GOING.^_______^Its realy good,the way the online talk was going was FUNNY and CUTE!!!Can't wait to see what happens when they see each other.hehhehe.U date soon.