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for Rins wants!

by Sexycat85

person Anon
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think you could continue.. but you are in desperate need of spelling and grammar teachings.

stay in school kiddo. and get a goooood beta
person Mmoirai
schedule January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The blossoming young maiden Rin lusting after her mysterious Lord Sesshoumaru is one of my favorite story lines. Yeay!

You will want to find a Beta reader to go over your chapters and check them for grammer errors though. Working with a Beta will be a great way for you to advance your talents with writing in english. I think the main page of this site has a link for people looking for a Beta.

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