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Oh No! Don't let Sesshoumaru be to late! That bastard Naraku can't rape Inuyasha! He just can't be allowed to get away with it! Please update soon, I must know what happens next!

Holy crap!!! Something tells me the Sesshomaru in the pool with Inuyasha was Naraku!!! God! You suck leaving us hanging like that! *Throws banana cream pie*. Update woman!!!!

is the big bad guy naraku? i'm thinking it is - because how come inuyasha cannot feel his arousal, and yet the body is aroused - and you have that last paragraph that has sesshoumaru just reaching the village...and this is why it is short?

i hope so. and with naraku in play, i guess there will be some violence?

(i do hope naraku gets a thrashing from sesshoumaru, if you arent going to kill him off yet - but i'd like to get to see being soundly thrashed. i sound bloodthirsty...
but it's just because it was taking rumiko forever to kill naraku.)

and, i've been waiting for that explosive mating night *grins*
but i can wait some more - you do have this great pacing going.

and i like the way you treat miroku. lots of fun there, and yet, one can see the friendship he has for inuyasha. i really like that. it is how i see the relationship of inu and miroku. (your kazaana story is also interesting, but this story is absolutely good. makes my mornings)

thank you for the update.

may i ask why you will no longer update mediaminer? snow mentioned something...
i know someone who is nuts about uke but cannot access aff (i have no idea why)

Uh-oh I hope Sesshomaru makes it on time.

Good chapter. Poor Inuyasha.

Oh man when will it end!! Come on sessy!! I wish he would just get it already he can be that old and not have some idea of why Inu's fears are in the way. I love how you keep it funny aswell adding to the real parts of it ya know. I seen that your fics are still you MM(not uke I know) Damn them really it's not right they did my sister InuGrrrl the same way agh! But if you could send me word when you update I will lov ya forever and give cakes & cookies!! I really don't want to miss a chapter. And what was that thing at the end? I hope sessy comes back next chapter I hate them apart for long, and knowing naraku's around doesn't help non. Till next time

Oh boy Naraku's coming!!! I cant wait for that. This just keeps getting better and better.

Hahahaha! Poor Miroku, and poor Inuyasha. Great chapter, please update soon!

... and now you leave the chapter with the suggestion of naraku, who - i hate terribly. i'd like to see naraku defeated soundly, i'm so sick and tired of him always being alive. and i would like to see sesshoumaru kill him off - with that poison whip of his until nothing of naraku exists (excuse the rant).

what really interests me is how sess will turn-around inu's fear. i think this is especially difficult for sess (seeing he is all hot and bothered around inu) and he has to keep slowing himself - btw, you do admirably with his frustrations. the reader is left with no doubts about any of their feelings. and the thread of humor that continues along your fic is wonderful.

i must thank you for putting that tiny quip in place - when kagome attempts to sit inuyasha because she's again irritated at their fighting ways. i dont find those sits funny at all. there are times when inuyasha needs subduing, but sits are so... degrading for inu - the ostensible leader of the fact. so that's good.

you do a good job keeping their characters whilst maintaining fun.

i hope you manage to add fun when you have naraku as the villain once more...

thank you for the update! a good way to begin my monday morning.

Ahhh! Naraku - that ass! Hurry back Sesshou =3