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for A Delayed Dawn

by roshully

person chanda
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved that update! Look forward to your next one!
Chanda
schedule April 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great. More please I want see what happen.
person chanda
schedule March 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I wonder where Kagome ran off too? She must of slipped into osmosis...lol. In addition, what's with Kikyo...can we say psycho? Or just overly obsessed! Either way, I recomend serious medication.
Overall, I loved the chapter and looking forward until your next update.

Keep up the great writing,
Chanda
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think with each chapter this story simply gets better and better. Every chapter ends at a place that makes you just hunger for more soon. I wish all stories had this depth of plot and class, this is surely one of the chosen few.. because as much as I like it, it is nice to see a story that isnt PWP on every page!

*Not even my compres to this in plot thickness*
person chanda
schedule March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved the update...as they say the plot surly thickens. I will check that out and thank you for the information. I look forward til your next update.

Chanda
person chanda
schedule March 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'm so mad that nobody is reviewing. You have great grammer a good plot...different story line.

I look forward until your next update.

chanda
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short and boring my foot, I love the whole plot! Very original! Please update soon, please please please!
person chanda
schedule February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think this chapter was dull. I'm still Intrigued. Can't wait until your next update,
Chanda
person Zelix
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my oh my, this fic is SO interesting! Its truly rare to find something like this anywhere these days, a true gem in my opinnion. I will keep observing this fic very closely, i won't review with each update, but that doesn't mean i'm not paying close attention. Keep this up, i really love this.
schedule February 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CLIIFFY!!! Well yet another great chapter to a wonderful story :)please update soon.

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