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Wow so when Is Sess coming?

That was good I feel sorry for the cubs though knowing Sesshoumaru he won't spare them

my my my what is inuyasha to do!?!?! HOW could sessh kill cubs!?!?!? KYAAAAAA lovely lovely, i like sessh, but he's just too evil to be killing cubs!! so i say kouga it is! Keep up the good work!!! I hope you update again soon!!! hehe two chappies thankieS!

Oh my goodness, that was an angsty piece of work. And I love the angst;) Thanx so much for writing and sharing this with us. However, I have a bit of constructive critizism. And if it offends you, please delete the comment, write me a nasty email, and I promise I'll give ten reasons why your story's great. I think you could use a beta. In some areas the run-ons and word choices made the story hard to follow. Normally, I wouldn't say anything because I still enjoyed it but I really think your writing has alot of potential to be really, really great. And even the best writers out there use a beta. I don't because I'm a control freak and it makes my stories slow to release and not the best they could be. So I'm telling you from experience that a beta would be a great help both to me and to my readers. Please consider the idea, and if you have any questions, please let me know.

And if I offended you, please yell at me. I really didn't want to,
~Silence~

Go Yahsa!, I hope he can be happy for a while before Sess comes after him.

This was depressing. I felt so bad that All of Inuyasha's kids got killed. Is the rest of the story going to be this depressing? It was a good chapter though.

Please update soon!!! I want to see what did sess do specifically though it is pretty obvious what he did. And why doesn't Inuyasha revolt or go against sessh? I hope to find out, so definitely hope you update soon!!!!!!

That was hot

Aww, that awas sad he killed his pups

This is good! Shota is always so cute “Don’t eat me Sesshomaru!” lol.