rate_review Reviews

Love your story so much! It's one of my favorites =D
Creative ideas and it has a well paced plot. The romance doesn't feel rushed like with a lot of stories. Also the suspense that is building is fantastic! Can't wait to read more, and I really hope that you don't give up on this story.
You are a very talented writer, and I look forward to reading more from you!

I have just read all 19 chapters of this story (in like a few hours) and love it!! I can't wait for the next chapters. The only problem I have is that AFF does not have an author or story alert when an update goes out. Do you have a list I can join? I hate that there isn't any way to be alerted cause so many of my favorites get updated and I don't know for days and sometimes months (I follow a lot of stories - lol).

Anyway, I really enjoyed your story... the characters, the twists and turns, and I can't wait to see where the next chapters take us. Thanks for sharing your imagination with the rest of us.
Rhonda

Just letting you know that I'm looking forward to your next chapter, I check for updates almost every day... I'm also recommending this fic to my friends :) Please keep plugging away.

Loved it. Once all the rewrite is over I'd love toread it again. Can't wait till chapter 20 is up!!!

I have to admit that upon first reading the summary for this story, I couldn't bring myself to read it. I have a bad tendency to settle in with just a few works-in-progress and stick to them, waiting for updates and ignoring other possibly fabulous stories. I managed to get out of that rut for once just a few days ago and decided to finally give this story a try. I have not regretted the decision at all. I quickly became unable to tear myself away for long, wanting to get to the last posted chapter. I have finally read the whole thing and I enjoyed it immensely. I love AU plots because people come up with such interesting ideas. This story has one of the most exciting and interesting plots of any fics I have read. Keep up the excellent writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!

This chapter was incredibly excellent! I rejoice that Naraku didn't get away. However, you are going to start a sequel???? This is the last chapter until the sequel???? *Begins to drool and pant towards hysteria* Does this mean MORE WAITING????? *runs screaming through the house disturbing the neighbors* WE HAVE TO WAIT TO FIND IF KAGOME IS OKAY????? *gets tripped by cat who immediately smacks her repeatedly until she regains her sense*

Whatever. I will read and enjoy the re-write and I will wait for more of the story, however you choose to package it. Just be prepared to deal with my insane rages. *le sigh* I must rest now and re-read everything... insane rages are soooo exhausting!

Yay! I'm so happy to see that you haven't abandoned this fic! I also really like how you ended up handling this chapter. For a second there I feared that Naraku was going to get away so I'm glad that Inuyasha snapped out of it and took Naraku out NOW, once and for all. Hopefully Kagome will be okay. Looking forward to the next chapter...and sequel! :-)

I love this story, I only hope that there is some sex scenes in the next chapter or sequil. Gotta see Inuyasha getting it on with Kagome ya know.

I love love love this story so much. I check it to frequently hoping for an update! Your ability to make me feel what the characters are feeling, especially those feelings of dread is something that I adore. Keep it up! <3

amazing5tarapplause and all that jazz. Love it