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for A Fool's Redemption

by Grumblebear

person szaugg
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it looks very interesting. I am enjoying the writing style, and the plot has introduced just enough that I'm definitely curious about what has happened and what will happened, so I hope to see more soon!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude this is so cool !!!!! rock on biznatch (jk)!!!!!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wonderful imagry, i can recall the dream, the plane ride, the entrance into the city, the structures, colors, designs... eloquently described, so vivid, so detailed! no longer black and white words on a screen but taking shape becoming real.

i was captivated, intreiged and i am eagerly anticipating more.

thank you,
ginny
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far it seems that you have gotten off to a good start. I have read a story line like what you are writing about just yet. I could be wrong, but we'll see.

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