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for Brothers-in-Arms

by GingerBits

schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha's finially understanding why people hate politics~! This is getting good, keep it up!
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun chapter. thanks for the update, can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good. I hope you write more soon.
person Shedding Ink
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
God I love this story. It's almost the equivalent to torture though when I reach the end of a chapter but hopefully the wait won't be too long for chapter number 9.

Keep going. They are slowly starting to respond to each other. I can't wait to see how things develop.
person darksinistra
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wonderful!! I'm so glad you updated. You are very writing amazes me, and the way you describe scenes and interactions. They are so well thought of. Love your story. Please continue!!
person Merely Truth
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waow ! they are so CUTE !!! And why ? Because you're showing them with a great subtility. Your characters are beautiful, like I love them...
Thank you very much for your story !

From a mommy, french reader,

Bonjour de la France !

Merely Truth
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lmao, I love that "shoulder nudging" XD And Sesshomaru being all smug at the end... great! I can't wait to see other types of "physical alliance" Inuyasha shares with him! Please update as soon as you can. Your characterization of the guys is on par, and the humor is entertaining! Great job!


-DM
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that is so true with the unity. to see the two of them moving together like that would be so hot.. lol lol lol
the endding was just too sweet. i liked it.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update soon please, I really love this story, the progression of the characters is natural and realistic.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hn.

I like this. I like it ALOT. I just sat and read it from start to current chapter finish, and it's wonderful. It's believable. It's raw and polished at the same time. The brothers are in character, which is so hard to find reliably. I am big on dog signals...I use dominance and submission and pack order in quite alot of my fics, so to see it elsewhere and so well done is a treat I relish.

Pray...continue.

*wag*

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