schedule
July 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Definately worthy of praise. I really love your story. I'm enjoying every chapter very much. Outstanding writing too!! The scenery, dialogue, atmosphere, all excellent. The characters are very much in character and I appreciate it. Please write, write, write!!! And update soon :D
schedule
July 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well written and interesting: I'm enjoying this quite a bit. The memorie of jumping with Kagome, and how it affects him to no longer have her on his back, were poignant and I really enjoyed them. Inuyasha is just a very enjoyable character at the moment, and Sesshoumaru is looking interesting as well.
I can hardly wait for more!
I can hardly wait for more!
schedule
June 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, I like where this is going. I'll look for you on LJ as well. Hope to read more of this soon. Really good job with the characterization.
schedule
June 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice nice :D I hope more is comming soon! Also really glad that you put down the date of when you wrote it so its easier to know wether its still ongoing :D
Pls write more! eager to read it :D
Pls write more! eager to read it :D
schedule
June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cool. Here I am, thinking there's nothing new, and I realize I missed the update when I was on vacation! This is shaping up to be a fascinating story. I liked teh interaction between the both of them very much in this chapter. Hope to see more soon!
schedule
June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha this story is great so far , it is so cruel to make Sesshoumaru go ask for help , and from InuYasha of all demons *smirks* what a damaged pride he must have i am evil i know but let the bastard suffer longer , it suits him
because he's so damn cocky and blind
keep it up , i love the way you write
because he's so damn cocky and blind
keep it up , i love the way you write
schedule
June 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Unique! I like the tone of the story. I can't imagine how Sesshoumaru will feel having to ask Inuyasha of all people for help! Tsk, tsk, poor Sesshoumaru, I feel bad for him but it's fun to read. I like how you developed Inuyasha's character as more mature. It'll be fun to read to more. So, please update soon and fast!
schedule
June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is going so smoothly . I simply love it. They are so in character. Thanks so much for updating. I was waiting eagerly. Update sooon!!! Please!
schedule
June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
(squeal like a fangirl!) Holy crap. You need to add more! This is really getting good!! And I absolutely love the way the boys interacted and how Inuyasha has matured, yet is still his same old loveable self!! (squeee!!) Please update!!! (when you have a chance) SOON! XD
-DM
-DM
schedule
June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you are itegrating the shards from the LJ into this story. It also has an interesting storyline and none of the characters have been acting out of character at all. Sess is doing what he must, Shippou is an annoying brat (but loyal) and Inuyasha is ... well, Inuyasha.
I would love it if you could send me an email when you update.
I would love it if you could send me an email when you update.