rate_review Reviews

This is a lovely story so far. I don't know if you have given up on it or if you're just in the middle of the dastardly menace, writer's block. I was uncomfortable with bitchy Kagome, but this character does lend itself to your plot wonderfully, and isn't just blatant character bashing for no purpose, so it's easy to accept. I'm enjoying the other characters you have, Junko is well done. The slow thawing of Sess & Inyu is quite believable, I'm very glad that they haven't just skipped over years of outright hatred to become buddy-buddy "the past is the past" overnight.

I do hope you have plans to add more, because I am breathlessly dying to know what happens next & then next after that LOL.

Thank You for writing this, it has been a joy to read so far,
~ Sybil

omg!!! you so have to continue/finish this story... PLEASE!!!!! I don't care how long it takes just please please please finish it. Although reading your profile, I can relate whole heartedly with what you say there too. I realize it's been like 4 years but please don't just drop this story. it has definitely caught my interest and i'll be looking for it hoping its been updated

Awesome chapter!!! I <3 how you did the whole breaking of the leash narration..it was nicely put!!
I like how u describe Sesshomaru sama showing feelings for Inuyasha kun :)
Kawai!!!
Hope to read more :3

Could you update this soon? I'm gettin really into this story and I really do like the way you're playing with your OC's I'm sorry I can't spell their names but the oldest one who can see inside of Inuyasha? She is by far my favorite and I like the way you gave Spiritual Powers. It does seem overdone but I happen to love fics like that.

Will Kagome be an evil bitch in this story? Because while I don't mind it, sometimes it's refreshing to see a change. Ah well if she does become evil i'll still enjoy it!

I love the Valley and the way you described it. man I kinda wish it exsisted to be able to see it in the show huh? I hope to see more in this story! So please update soon?

By the way, the formatting in some of your chapters is a bit screwed up, you might want to fix that.

Typos galore in my last review I meant that I liked how you gave Rin spiritual powers and I meant Junko. I believe I spelled it right?

Love, Love this story and truly can't wait to read more. You have me completely immersed and captivated with your spell-binding words! Adore this fic and I'm already looking forward to the next couple of chapters! Yes! These obstinate Inu-brothers...when will they see reason! (Lol) Hope that Junko can help Sesshy and Yasha get together. *drools* They are just too smexy not to be with each other! Ja ne and good luck! xoxo =]]

I absolutely adore this story. Junko reminds me a little of Kaede and yet is different enough not to just be a demon version of Kaede. I love the slight implication you give at the end of this most recent chapter that Sesshomaru might be interested in Inuyasha. I love the premise of this story. I also love how you had the beads removed. I just love this story all around. If I knew you, I might want to hug you or kiss you or give you cookies at least. I really have enjoyed this story so far. It was exactly what I needed and was looking for. Please continue this story. I love it dearly and sincerely hope you update soon!

Hey I love the story but its hard to read the next few chapters because of the way its structured and there seems to be a life extra codes in the wording--I love it hope you can fix it cux i really want to read it fully

Love every single chapter of it! I'm glad that the rosary finally off. Hehehe.. can't wait for the romance between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru

It was great to see you back with this story again. I have really enjoyed it since I first read it. I hope you do finsh it. It has always been a great beginning.