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for Yuudai no Keikoku

by ashlin86

schedule February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon
schedule February 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot. Especially your solution for that necklace Inuyasha is wearing. And I can see Kagome becoming such a controlfreak. She shows enough potential both in the manga and the series for that to happen. She will be in for a huge suprise once she gets to know that Inuyasha is no longer under her control. Inuyasha's relationship with his brother though is still strained. I guess after so many years of trying to kill him Sesshomuaru will have to work a bit more on gaining his brothers trust. But asking little Rin to help Inuyasha should be a good start. I am just a bit sad that you haven't updated in so long. Will you continue writing or has real life been in the way to much? It would be wonderful to read more.
person jgoodman
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story please update
person Elvira
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story! Please! Update soon! I now this is really not a place to say but I really dislike Kagome and O really don't care for her. I honestly think she is a spoiled brat that needs to learn her place in their Youkai society and learn manners when in another's home. My parents would kill me if I acted like that in another's home. Especially while like with Kouga, since he lives with so many others, she needs to learn proper respect. You should have her learn proper respect. Sorry for ranting its just I really dislike her. And I apologize to others if this offends anyone.

Anyways hope to see another update soon!

JA!
person Nilyenea
schedule March 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. I read it straight thru without stopping to read any others. I really really hope you are going to finish it?
person dela1
schedule December 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a wonderful story plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon
person 1127
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have just re-read your story and all I can say is PLEASE PLEASE !!!! Up date soon.I can hardly wait to see where you are going to take it. And just what you are going to do with those "Two stubbron demons " !!! Do keep up you great work !!!!
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I don't believe it is in anyway moving too fast as they have been at the castle for a few months, if I am correct in my thinking, and Inuyasha has learned so much and has less resentment and his admarition of his brother has come to the fore and increased. Thus, I think for Sesshoumaru to be seeing his brother in a new light due to the obvious changes as well as his loss of hatred, it seems only natural that he would like his brother more....and if that more leads to non-brotherly feeling YAY!!lol. So, keep up the great work and I hope to hear more from you soon....hopefully it doesn't take a year...maybe a couple weeks lol.
schedule September 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story,please update soon, looking forward to cont.parts and chapters. thankyou.
schedule September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice to have you back.

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