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for Yuudai no Keikoku

by ashlin86

person Aini
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to have this story back. :D Excellent chapter. I didn't notice or think that there was anything missing at all. And you're not rushing the romance at all. In fact, I think it's going at the perfect pace. You're doing very well to bring the emotions in slowly, instead of the "I hate you"/Sess saves Inuyasha from something/"I love you" pattern. You've placed emotions into the characters and made it seem as if they've always been there. I'm very excited to read your next chapter. I hope that it comes out soon, but don't push yourself. Good luck with everything! And keep writing!
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is progressing perfectly.

Im glad your okay. *cookies*

~Sophie Max-Anderson
schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story so far. Its very entertaining. I hope you will be able to finish :-)

Take care,

Pumpkinpi
person cshadow
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yippy, your back. I love this story. It's one of my favorites. I can't tell you how many times I've read it hoping for an update. I can't wait to see where you take this story. Keep up the great work.
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting
person wolfluv
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
To me this chapter was seemless you wove your story perfectly! Ju is the only one right at the moment thining of pairing the brothers I think the speed you've set so far is great! I always check to see if you've had the time to update this story and I was thrilled to see that you had, I'd rather wait then have a story never be finished you are kind enough to share this story with us what more could we ask then to hope life allows you the time to see it through.

I'm glad you are okay from your accident!!!

THANK YOU FOR UPDATING AND TO YOUR MUSE!!!
person 1127
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back !!! So glad to hear that you were not hurt badly. Thanks for the great chapter !!! I can hardly wait to see where you take it from here. As for going to fast... Trust yourself. As with your first 8 chapters I'm sure we well not be disappointed !!! Once again, Welcome back!!
person KIKI441
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
first off, i'm glad you weren't hurt too seriously
in the accident. and second, i didn't see much
wrong except for a couple off sentences that had
an extra word that made the senctence odd but
other than that it was fine. i was so glad
inuyasha is free from those rosary. you can
tell kagome never really cared about inuyasha
when she didn't realise that the important thing
she lost was her connection to inuyasha.

and as for sesshomaru and inuyasha's relationship i think you
are moving it along at the right pace. i can't wait until
the time arrive when kagome finds out that she can no longer
'sit' inuyasha. i bet she is gonna freak.

schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!! I was so shocked when I saw that this story had been updated, I thought for sure I would never find out what else what going to happy. yay for Rin, such an awesome kid she is. I just really loved this chapter and I don't think that they're moving very fast. I think Inuyasha's and Sesshomaru's pace is perfectly fine, I can't wait to see what happens at the gathering, what stupid thing Koga is gonna say to Inuyasha. I'm so grateful you've got your muse back and I hope it continues to inspire you:)

Thank You very much!!1:D
person Afrieal
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh goddess we're glad you're okay and all... we loved the update and look foreward to more when you can. Oh and we understand near death experiences reviving muses. Well that and being forced for a month to endure psychotic relitives with limited internet that will do a lot as well *smile*

affie and rysha

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