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Wonderful. I find that this story kinda pulls me in. Kinda makes
me feel like Inuyasha is a real person and this is his story.

Very good!

Oh how could you say that this chapter is long and boring? I really really like this chapter. details tell you what you need to know and I really love long chapters, it's like getting a present reading what 10 extra pages or so. Now then I really love the end finally someone understands Inuyasha, someone is going to help him and consoul him and help him. Finally someone saw what no one else wanted and their thinking about him first. and I'm quite please about it. I'm so happy that you did something different, a social worker of sorts fines that kagome miss way too much school. I mean really who would buy all of those lame excuse the old man been giving? And I'm going to make this very clear I DON'T LIKE KAGOME AND SHE SHOULD NOT BE WITH INUYASHA!! I wouldn't want to be with someone that treats me like a dog and have so called friends and don't see anything wrong with it. I'm glad kadea is finally starting to see she is one of my favorite characters. In chapter three were you said that inu close his eyes you said there were gold when he was a human at that time. and there are some words missing. I hope you update soon. Because I only login when the fic is good enough, or if I just review. Please update soon I fine myself really looking forward to your next chapters and please don't be shy with long chapters and to repeat myself there is nothing word with what you put in this fic. I love details how else do we get to feel like the people you are writing about? well than I'm sure theres more I wanted to say and can't think of it right now to plz update soon.

ladytokyo

please update soon
Seems like inyasha has a long way to go

Amazing!

good chapter! Another soap option might be soapwort or a similar plant.

i didn't think it was too long and besides, once you
get the introduction of all the characters out of the
way. then you start t o get to the good stuff. i for
one hope junko is able to remove the rosary. that is
something inuyasha can definitedly do without. kagome
only uses it when she's frustrated and angry with
him for some stupid little thing. then she sits
him in front of koga. that is humiliating to be
sat like a common dog in the face of your rival.
anyway, i hope the next update will be soon because
i am dying to see what will happen next.

so far so good. i like his teacher's . they will do him a lot of good. he will be something too see in six months. looking forward too the look on his friends faces when they meet the new and improve inu..or should i say lord.

Keep the details. They are interesting. I like how this story is progressing.

Sorry 'bout your computer woes, they can be SO frustrating!

Another awesome chapter:D I'm very happy that somethingis going to be done about the rosary around his neck. Finally someone is thinking of protecting him from kagome, finally someone to understand his feelings. I love the new characters, everyone is so interesting. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to see the new chapter.

Thank You!