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Chapt. 5
Thank you for all your hard work digging up facts! They give your story depth and allow us to see the little nuances that make up the scene in rich detail. It's great Junko is on hand for Inuyasha; bringing her in sounds like the only really good thing that Sesshoumaru has done for Inuyasha. Some one who can heal his broken soul. And get rid of that nasty kodoma! Maybe Kouga can stall Kagome and the others for a year or two waiting for the 'correct' invitation...lol
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Yea! I love your work so far. Keep it coming. I can't wait so see where this is going.

I really enjoyed this chapter. I didn't find it boring at all. Yes, there wasn't a lot of action, but it was all intersting and the characters were fascinating enough that I was really curious to see what was coming next.

As for the 'pull the character out of one's ass' thing...I think sometimes those are the ones that end up really enriching a story. The last one I did was a character who shows up in the second chapter, and ends up being the main antagonist! Who knew? :-) Maybe it's the whole ass connection: yaoi, asses....gotta be something good there, LOL.

Anyway, I like the swordsmaster, the servant, and the mystic gal. I am enjoying the depth of research that is bringing this alive, and I like the pace. It's slow, but it's rich and engaging; a good combination, IMO.

this is really, really, really good. i abosultely love it so far. i cant wait to see how inuyasha handles his lessons and the change of the relationship between him and his brother. till next time, ja!

I liked it a lot. Inuyasha - I am very happy to find Inuyasha sticking to his honor so wonderfully. and I would say more, but I've gotta go. Just...looking forward to more, really enjoying it, and I like how you're doing the characters and the plot!

nice story.

Wow... That left me wanting more. Hope you update soon and
good luck untill then.

YAY a good story!!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!! I'm so happy you decided to write this story. There is such a shortage of really good sess/inu stories out there and this is looking to be one of the really good ones. I'm really loving this plot. I like the idea of something so magnificent belonging to Inuyasha thus giving him the opportunity for sesshomaru to get to know him. I have no respect for Kagome taking out her frustrations out on Inuyasha. I'm always disappointed when the others never say anything to her. Kikyo used to be his first love. He wants her to find peace and he still loves her, you can't treat him bad because hes inadvertently hurting someone else's feelings. Will sesshomaru find a way to get the beads off before Kagome and the others get there? Can't wait to read the rest of your story. Keep up the good work and please update as often as you can :D

Thank You

Great fic ! I'm enjoying it. Honestly, though, I think Inuyasha should kick everyone out of HIS castle. I mean, it's gotta be galling...the little human girl that his brother takes care of after a century of abandoning and attacking Inuyasha gets to see it first? And wander around in it? That's just cruel.

i just finished reading all three chapters
and i thought this story was great. so,
the twins shinmaru was talking about are
they going to be the ones to teach inuyahsa
the proper way to talk? with inuyasha's
vocabulary he will need years of study. but i
can't wait to see what they do once they arrive.
they sound like they will be fun characters to
irritate the hell out of inuyasha.

anyway, once again great story and i look forward
to the next chapter. hopefully, it will be soon.