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I like how the story is going so far. Please keep it up. Also, could you make the chapters longer -puppy eyes-

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need something to happen. some action come on... please

Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Very nice. I look forward to more.

You're off to a great start; however, you should get a beta-reader. You're mixing up the tenses, which is a common mistake. Also, you might want to change Tetsusaiga's number of kills, you will definately nailed on that for the mere fact that it's mentioned in the third movie and one of the episodes as killing a 100 demons in one stroke not a million. And the same goes for Tenseiga, the sword the can save a 100 lives in one stroke. Remember, the swords are opposite of each other, the Tetsusaiga is from Inu no Taisho's left fang and Tenseiga is made from his right fang.

But other than that, you're doing fine. Please continue.

Nemesis ^_~

interesting.. but nothing new has happened, so... i reserve the rest of my comments
from the tidbits you sprinkled along your fic,
this fic is on something i like and i hope you continue ...

Grate chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

It was well done. Continue ^^