rate_review Reviews

i hope you decide to continue this story

I LOVE IT!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!^-^

It's the same story as your Original fic, just with different names. That's pretty lame. Don't you have other ideas?

I like where this is going. It's a really good start and I really hope to see more of this one.
The chapters were a little short for my taste, but every writer works at their own pace.
So don't push yourself if you think you have to.
Despite its shortness, I can tell it will be a ver interesting story by the end.
You did a good job with the originality.

Ur-Gay-Luvr
Rocky

Interesting consept! Continue!

you are asking for a review but there isnt enough details in your 2 chapter fic to review. let me summarize

inuyasha is maliciously sent to a demon prison which is divided into 2 camps, one controlled by sess, the other by kouga.

since it is that short, i cant review it except to encourage you to continue until there is something substantial enough to review

this is a different take, and as you say, AU. so...
you might want to invest in a beta reader, that is an editor to catch your spelling errors
everyone makes typo errors so your editor can catch these errors before your fic is published.

like noises - not spelled with a c.

So far it is interesting. Just waiting to see where you going with it.