rate_review Reviews

I like the story- the concept it great. I think it may have gone a little fast from Sesshomaru coming to his aid and then flipping to the castle. I hope you intend to continue this, but keep in mind the timing involved with such things... It takes 3 months from the 1st encounter to Miroku trying to kill himself, and then miraculously, overnight, Sesshomaru comes, saves him, takes him to the castle and declares undying love for him, and the unborn child... That's really pushing the envelope, so to speak.. And where are the rest of the gang?

So good. I love this pairing.