rate_review Reviews

*whimper* Torture... *whimper* Nope, don't particularly like it but... damn if I won't read it! XD Yes, regardless, I'll read it, though I may be squicked >.< lol. I liked this chapter, and the detail of emotion and thoughts it presented! Great job! ^^

-DM

Oh soo soo yummy! Very good!

Poor Inuyasha. In love with Sesshoumaru when he knows that there will a chance that it will never be returned. I love the story. I hope to read more.

me like now they are getting somewhere. keep them coming.

I read all 6 chapters in 1 sitting... Excellent- although the rape scenes are quite dramatic. I don't think that Sesshomaru saw them as rape, he doesn't think like that- he doesn't have human sight or emotions. He was just trying to break his little brother down. InuYasha is more human than youkai in his thought, his body betrays that though. I am anxious to see how you manage to bring InuYasha's youkai to the forefront and put his human side back a little so the two brothers can come to some median place- if that is where you are indeed planning on taking them.

this is moving along nicely.

Hey!! No fair *sobs*....evil cliffy.... but very good story I look forward to the rest of it!

You have... NO IDEA... how much I liked that chapter. Inner thoughts, NO TORTURE!, a slight arousal of the inu brothers, NO TORTURE!, calm... NO TORTURE! XD I realllllyy like this chapter since it delved more into feelings and thoughts (and the no torture aspect XD) and had a calm feelng about it (or maybe that's just me... I feel so sick and tired right now ugh). Though in places it felt awkward and confusing... (again, it was probably me, my mind is almost mush right now X_X) but other than that, yosh!


-DM

intense and fast paced... very hot and Sesshomaru is definitely HOTTTTTTTT

Ow, ow, ow, owwwww!!! I seriously FEEL for Inuyasha (like, literally you make me feel what he's going through X_X). But I liked it regardless (sorry Inuyasha! ^_^;;)! I hope Inuyasha heals though. I seriously do feel for the guy. *sniff* It's like... forceful, consensual sex... sorta. Very forceful consensual on some level sex XDXDXD Good job! You totally get the feelings of both inus AND what's physically happening to the hanyou across X_X (a little too well... but in a good way for writing lmfao!)

Looking forward to more!


-DM