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Please finish this great story.

great story please finish it

about #18 [going by page, NOT chapter]...

New reader in the house....wanted to briefly say I'm enjoying this so far, so when
will the boys stubbornness start to wane away? It's about time they put asides their
differences and not for the sake of the child, but for the simple fact, Satori is
up to no good and they need to combine their strengths, if they are to win whatever
fight is heading their way.

okay i have to tell you the truth. i couldnt even get past the second chapter. its not that i hate it its just that you didnt get to the point fast enough. i had no idea what you were talking about. but thats just me. and i usually just want a lot of smex ;P

I am enjoying this story greatly, but I have one question (i might have over looked it being I was reading this story in the we hours of the morning) but why didn't Kagome sence the Shards in Satori?

Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

dose everyone hate Kagome that much? Wow!! Look I think its a little cool about Inuyasha and Sesshomaru,but I still feel sorry for Kagome. He always hurt her so please let her be free of him and let her go home to her own time. It seems the whole group is happy about Sesshomaru and Inu yasha and I already know your going to make it where he stays with Sesshomaru. Hell if I was Kagome I would be hurt but happy for him because he found love. Yes, I would be anger at the same time but forgiveing like she always is. Hell she always forgave him when he ran off with Kikyo. Just let the girl go back to her own time and have it where she forgets about him and the time and her feelings as if they never happen. The can destory Narku with out her besides you have to where he dose bnot really love her. Just let the girl be free.

Aw, I'm so happy to hear that my review made your day! *grins from ear to ear* Oh dear, I'm afraid that you've tainted my mind so. This is... the first incest story I've read too (let's not discuss my foray into Star War's fanfiction); but it's the first yaoi IY story I've read... honestly, this story is a lot of firsts on my list.

... you make me want to go back and watch the series; and I've been over it for two years now! Anyways, maybe I'll experiment in this fandom too... unfortunately, it will have to wait for me to finish up those other two unfinished works that I should be working on instead.

BUT THANK YOU AND I ADORE THIS STORY. ;D

Please finish this story I'm all into it ......

several chapters update!

late in reading because of RL issues - had major surgery.

and so things are into the exciting part....