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for Dubious Relations

by Werewolfoffire

schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh dear sesshy needs to get over the fact that he's mated to inu and carrying his pup. and also if he thinks he can get rid of the pup now that aint gonna happen now that inu has felt his kid. poor chiyo wats a demoness to do wit 2 spoiled stubborn half demon brothers. if i were her i'd give them a good spanking lol.
person gen50
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
it seemed short. but very good. it seems a while since i last reviewed, but i had RL stuff going on.

hmmm. more....
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i hav to say is uh-oh wat are those naraku incarantes up to wit bringing mama back. and chiyo luv her. cant get enough so update soon
person misswarchan
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I left a review for this story on FF...I think it might have been insulting, didn't mean to be but I feel as if it was. I'd like to say here and now that I was in no way trying to push for a sex-scene. I really only wanted to was if there are or is going to be scenes or chapter here on AFF that wouldn't be on FF? I'm not really meaning sex-scenes when I ask this! This is one of the best Inu/Sess (uke!Sess *sluurrr~*) stories that I've ever read so far in this fandom! I'd so hate to insult the great author (yes I'm a suckup) who had made such wonders!!! ^_~

~Miss War-chan
person wolfluv
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story on other fan sites and I think it is Awsome! I just have a problem though. You wrote on FF that you couldn't do sex scenes??? I have read a few of them on that particular site and now you are here and it is okay to write them you get Inu and Sess so close and then abrubtly pull back to the point it is so frustrating that I cannot read this any further theres too much angst and not enough close tender moments between the two of them you seem to be working up to then dash all hopes of even a real kiss between the two if you cannot write a sexual scene then please say so either at the beginning of your next chapter or at the end I want to read this story but my frustration level has reached it limits I had this story under favorites but because of your comment on FF and the thought that they will never share an intiment moment until you write one after the story just puts me out. I maybe the only one that thinks this way but I am almost positive I am not. If you look at the reviews of other story that have them intiment you will see the reviews are almost 10 fold I am not saying to do it for the reviews Or me I know it's the writers decision always but I just wanted you to know that to me your story is so painful I cannot continue to read the abuse you have put Inu and Sess through you seem to have no heart when it comes to them. You should put under the warning you write no sex shall ever be involved in the story so that others maybe able to figure it out before continuing the story only to maybe or maybe not be disapointed. To me your stroy is an absolute deceptive story that all fans of this pairing would want to know what to expect and not to. SO I BEG YOU AS A GREAT WRITER YOU ARE TO HAVE ME SO UPSET THAT YOU PUT IN BOLD THAT THERE WILL BE NOT SEX SCENES IN THIS STORY EVER! I THINK IT'S THE LEAST YOU COULD DO FOR THE FANS OF THIS PAIRING! I hope to read future storys that you write in hopes that you will at least warn in the begging if you choose not to write the scens in but I would hope that you would at least try when writing here to do so. Thank you and good luck with your story.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES WERE ARE GETTING SOMEWHERE
person WeIrDpErSoN
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still to lazy to log in bleh

But I'm still loving it!! Like I've stated before, this story is oh so refreshing!! Love it! And can't wait for more awesomeness! Psst, just to let you know I like how you have the only lemon being at the end of the story, I believe that it'll fit so much better there. But then again as the story keeps progressing, I might change my views, but it just doesn't seem important for them to "get on it" LOL. haha oh well. I can't wait for more keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey Woffy!

Sorry for not reviewing or saying hello sooner, been kinda busy with a bunch of other stuff (forum coding).

Anyway, glad to see you posting here!
person MewMew2
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eExcellent story. I can see that the fic is going along quite smoothly. I eagerly await for the next chapter.....
person Aini
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aw! Inuyasha's actually going to try!!! Awesome! :D What about Sesshomaru though? Gah, how crazy! I can't wait to read more. ^_^ Keep it up!

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