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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It was a long time coming, but worth the wait! Good job- B reading U!
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good start of story.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter.
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April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. This story is fascinating, I need more.
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March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think the tempo was better in this chapter. the apprehension over what is happening to inuyasha is building, nicely.
i think it would be wise to explore the character's emotions more fully. in the beginning of the story, you were doing this with sesshoumaru's emotions. in this chapter i think inuyasha's friends' feelings of fear and anxiety should have been expanded.
thank you for this post, and i will be watching for the next.
i think it would be wise to explore the character's emotions more fully. in the beginning of the story, you were doing this with sesshoumaru's emotions. in this chapter i think inuyasha's friends' feelings of fear and anxiety should have been expanded.
thank you for this post, and i will be watching for the next.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes sessy to the rescue.
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes! update time. i was hoping that when they
went to sesshomaru that you would have put his
reaction when they told him inuyasha was
kidnapped by naraku and that naraku was going to do
to inuyasha what the Keeper had done to him. other
than that, this chapter fine as is.
please update soon because i am just dying to see
what will happen once sesshomaru do find out.
went to sesshomaru that you would have put his
reaction when they told him inuyasha was
kidnapped by naraku and that naraku was going to do
to inuyasha what the Keeper had done to him. other
than that, this chapter fine as is.
please update soon because i am just dying to see
what will happen once sesshomaru do find out.