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December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good start. it explains quite a bit about sesshoumaru's attitude, and lays groundwork for any feelings you may develop between the brothers.
watch tendencies with switching similar words, such as: fallow and follow, or innocents and innocence. even though, the word innocents in the title of the chapter made poetic sense.
i will be eagerly awaiting your next update.
watch tendencies with switching similar words, such as: fallow and follow, or innocents and innocence. even though, the word innocents in the title of the chapter made poetic sense.
i will be eagerly awaiting your next update.
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December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice i can see him doing that.
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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
BRILLANT! THANK YOU FOR CLEARTNG UP THE STORY QUESTION!!!! MANY THANKS!!!
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November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
too short
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you came back with a vengance!!! (Pardon the pun) Great chapter! Next time, don't take so long! B reading U!
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor kid!Sesshomaru...that evil man! Another good chapter...albeit still short. Please make them longer! *KISS*
Lilith
Lilith
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November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please don't tell me there is only one chapter left?!? This story is Great a new story line that I haven't ever seen! Please go on!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon, please, i can't wait to see what's next
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! Evil cliffie! Please keep going!
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Story is good....but pleaaaaseeeee could you write longer chapters?!!! Or update soon cuz the waiting drives me nuts. lol