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by sootnsab

person Rukhsana
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it, good beginning, but may I point out an inconsistantcy? She said she would be a virgin until she got married, yet she is waiting for their night together? Would this their wedding night then?oo
person sootnsab
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the Review!!!

And yes I did mean the wedding night. I wanted to show how much commitment means to Kagome seeing how that is the one problem that InuYasha and Kagome seem to have.

Thank you again for reviewing.

----Mia Raye

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