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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
More than the sex scene (which is just fan-myself-hawt), their closing scene, where Rin cradles his head and he falls asleep, is just so sweet! Really lovely, well done.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was great. i really enjoyed this. nice job. hope you write more?????
please and thank you.
please and thank you.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's so nice, I reviewed it twice. ^ ^
Why don't you post "Citrus Rain" here? Or is it here, and I just can't find it? Or maybe I never thought to look . . .
Happy writing!
Why don't you post "Citrus Rain" here? Or is it here, and I just can't find it? Or maybe I never thought to look . . .
Happy writing!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for this sweet and wonderful story ! ^^
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
steamy and sweet ^_^ great job.
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! very sweet, well written!
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October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good writing = in fact excellent!