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October 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL, i love the ending. It's funny.
^_^ Ruuka.
^_^ Ruuka.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Last line made me laugh.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was execlent writting wow you really had me there for a minute. "dont forget the ramen"
i was expecting blood shed loved it.
i was expecting blood shed loved it.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lmao, that was great.
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh.... i loved it! ^_^
it was great.
and the ending caught me by surprised.
amazing rhyme scheme and the flow was great.
delightful treat for halloween!
it was great.
and the ending caught me by surprised.
amazing rhyme scheme and the flow was great.
delightful treat for halloween!
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October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! What a perfect IY Halloween poem!! I salute both the concept and the execution. ^_^