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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! I think some one is in trouble when the brothers find her!!!! Can't wait to see! please post the next chapter soon.
kurai
kurai
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yes, keep it up I want to read more.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. If you still need someone to check your grammar and spelling I would be happy to volunteer.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO update again soon please. although that thing with inuyasha and sesshy scared me a bit I like your story!
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey the story is great so far I can't wait to read more. I wouldn't mind to be your beta, if you still need one? If not that's ok, I still enjoy reading the story, lol.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was WOW plaese update soon
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SPIFFY I love this story so far please update soon!!!
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh snaps, how is Kagome going to take being pregant! Please update soon!!
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your story is very interesting. The lemons could use a bit of work, but overall, it was well thought out and plotted. I can't wait to see another chapter.
(When I say the lemon could use a bit of work, I am meaning for you to slow down and not rush it. Some of it seemed forced, but I am not perfect in my own writing as well.)
(When I say the lemon could use a bit of work, I am meaning for you to slow down and not rush it. Some of it seemed forced, but I am not perfect in my own writing as well.)
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!