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this should have more reviews.
boo, mean people.
this is really really good. I hope you continue it. I almost feel like she should draw him, but that might be too corny.
hehe.
interesting to see what she ends up drawing/where you take this.
I like the twist of Miroku being Inuyasha's roomate...I kind of thought that might happen.

lol, i wonder when inuyasha and kagome are gonna find out they live down the hall from each over.
kagome really needs to cheer up a bit lol
plz update soon :) thank youuuuuuuuuuu

Awwwww... How those thoughts of what we should have done come too late all too often. LOL No problem on that. It took me a while to finally realize that I had to save the chapter as a webpage to upload it directly so the italics, bold and underlining would transfer with it. I was so excited with two chapters to read. Great job. I love this story. Poor Inu Yasha and Kagome though. I wonder when they are going to realize that they live so close together. That should make it interesting in the hall. LOL

Well, you take care. I hope your holiday went smoothly and was great. I will be keeping my eyes open for another update.

awww inu's so sweet, am i right in thinking hes mirokus creazy roommate?
he should offer for her to stay with him 4 a time lol
plz update soon x

this is turning out so well.
good job.

great start, love the way u get strat into the story.
i hope u keep righting this fanfic (unlike alot of the writers on this site lol)
plz keep up the good work :)

This was a very good start to a story. So far, it has very interesting and intriguing dynamics, great character development through the interaction and Kagome's own thoughts.

I have one suggestion about the end of this chapter: You should transition into the dream rather than jump. I had to read it a couple of times to figure out what just happened. Although, I did get it after a bit. LOL

Take care. Please update soon!!!

I like your story, please update soon. :)