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for She Who the Prophecy Foretold

by SunsetMiko

person Jade
schedule April 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and have read many of your other fics, will you ever finish this story? i hope you will..
person lara5170
schedule April 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much that I just reread it again for ....like, the 7th or 8th time. I really hope you continue to write this because I can't wait to find read more. I'm dying to know who Kagome's dad is & if he's human or not. I was thinking about how Sessh couldn't understand how a human miko (Kagome) could hold more than 1/2 of his youkai in there body & how he couldn't get it all out when he tried to take it back & Sessh wondered why Kagome's miko powers didn't purify the youkai in her body...., it made me wonder. Then, when Naraku mentioned how he couldn't see into the Northern Lord's area (castle or whatever?) & how after Kagome opened the box with the special arrow, it hinted that 'in the North' a man with black hair, blue eyes & a familiar smile sensed the box opening.. It also mentioned something about how when she reached her dad there was a transformation that was needed to help her win. (Along with the idea that Kagome was born with the jewel made from both miko & youkai) ..
All of those things made me wonder if Kagome could be something more than just a powerful miko. There are so many other things going on in this story that I'm dying to find out about (like, how in an early chapter it mentioned that Kaede had a scroll or envelope she was holding, then Keade stated that Rin would also be important to Kagome's prophecy & she seemed to hint there was another scroll to Kagome's prophecy?)


I can't wait to read more..
person bella donna
schedule January 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
More more more me want more, give give give PLEASE!!! I loved it, and the reward goes to you for the funniest arousal Squasher 'thinking of jaken naked, then thanking the kami for it!!' R.O.F.L.M.G.D.F.A.O.T.I.C!!! Amazing!
just in case you don't know what that stands for, it's Rolls on floor laughing my god damn fucking ass off till I cried!!! And I really did, had I not already been laying down I would've fallen over, and probably hurt myself! Upload more soon please I can't wait to read more!
person shyneamor
schedule December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG, this story is sooo awesome. I hope you haven't given up on it especially when the plot is just starting to unfold. Please update soon.
person lara5170
schedule September 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story & I've reread it many times. The is story is so well written, the characters are great, the plot & sub-plots are interesting & unique. I can't wait to read more, find out what happens next, learn more about the prophecy (what affect it will have on Kagome) & how everything will turn out. I find myself checking on it from time to time to see if it has been updated. I know how hard it is to balance your time when you have a busy life but I hope this story gets continued. It hasn't been updated in a long time and I can't help but fear it will be left incomplete forever.
person faye
schedule February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i love to read she who the prophecy fortold but the last chapter i read was chapter 80 and that was on a single spark, but now i can't get it so i read it on dokuga but it goes to chapter 79 or 80. have you wrote anymore yet i would love to read more
person Legilmyth
schedule June 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know its been a long time. But it would be so awesome to see this story finished. it has such a wonderful plot.
person Aaliyah Starnight
schedule December 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love your story, does not matter how many times I read it i fall in love with it all over again, i did reread The Syndrome and i love the new chapters that was added. Sorry I have not been around lately, just finshed school and everything and getting ready to move in with my fiance and it is just a big ole mess.. *sighs* you should email me and and things so we can catch up.. georgiabrown1987@yahoo.com
person lara5170
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is great....its intricate, intense & unique. What an amazing mind it must take to come up with something like this. I was overwhelmed by ch 19 & the story was just starting at the point.It keeps getting more & more amazing. Then I got to ch 21 & we're introduced to "The Prophecy" mentioned in the title of the story. It's like now the amazing story is really just geting started. Now that I have read all of the 33 chapters written I have to think I thought at some point earlier in the story Kaede mentioned that she has something also to give Kagome something that someone gave her a very long time ago & told her to hold onto it & not give her it until the time was right....I could be wrong about this but then how else would she know about this prophecy.If I am right then now that Kagome knows shouldn't Kaede have given her whatever she is holding.Unless what she is holding has to do with Rin but I don't think so. I also don't know why but when I first read the actual prophecy I thought a girl was mentioned & thought it meant Rin but when the prophecy was read aloud by Miroku in front of the group it wasn't mentioned. During the actual prophecy begins with: the girl of 2 era's dragged into the past,cursed jewel of 4 souls torn from her body & shattered all over Japan.Starting her journey to meet each person,not by name, but what they represented (4 parts)courage,knowledge,friendship & love..then she must have her soul intact again(undead kikyo killed).Then 3 events that needed to happen before she could be told who she was & what her destiny was.The 3 events were actually gifts/markings of 9 specific demons:7 pups gave marks of love for a mother,Sessh gave the mark of the night sky,Shippo's name means 7 treasures & his mark is blue flames ...& then "She will be given the Arrow of Destiny to always point her in the right direction.She must then follow where it will lead her,to find that which will Form the bridge of powers,initiating the transformation necessary to defeat the great evil" ...we know the arrow will lead to her father living in the past who has been something of great power & importance. I can't imagine what her dad is like & if he's human & then what the bridge is & the transformation it'll initiate....What is Kagome? A great priestess, yes...but why can she retain youkai without her miko powers purifying it....will she become a powerful Miko-Inu-Youkai with a bit of fox youkai(I say mainly inuyoukai since she's surrounded by 8 & 1/2 & marked by 8 inu demons & 1 fox-fire demon) I can't wait to see what's next
person lara5170
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been unable to stop reading this story since I began & now I've read 19 chaps without taking a break long enough to review.I hope I can be forgiven my rudeness.I really enjoyed the story & meant to review many times & much sooner.I hope this story isn't abandoned or I think I'll die a slow,painful death.I still have more to read as I believe there are more chaps available & I'll try to review more frequently.I enjoyed this story so much & I feel guilty.I tried reading this once & when I read Sessh had pups of his own, I stopped reading.I really want to see Sessh & Kagome together & couldn't see a way for them to become a family if he had one already or one that consisted of many women.
I haven't finished reading what is written yet but if it's not finished ...................pls update & complete I love this story & can't wait to see where it's going & how it'll end.

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