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i still love this story but since i can't read it on a single spark anymore please finish it on adultfanfiction i would love to finish reading it last went to 80 chapter thats were i left off.

Ya'know, you've got this habit of leaving things at the best part -_-


I've fallen head over heals for all your work on this site. This one is, again, one of the best Sess/Kag pairings I've read with little to no out of character feelings. I like how in this story, you've turned Sess's mom into a more kind-hearted person. I don't utterly despise her. Wonderful work my dear and I am eagerly awaiting all your updates!

wow that was awsome..... please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel

I love love love this story. I don't know how I had missed it before, but I'm all finished with chapter 33 now and can not wait to read more. I had read most of your stories and they are wonderful. I read the stories on my cell phone and my boyfriend seems to think my phone is now another appendage. Ha. Keep writing you are wonderful.

Amiti
apassino@cfl.rr.com

Usually I will not read a story until it is completed - - I've started stories before, gotten interested and then they have not been completed This story is interesting and well written, please be sure to complete it, not only for your readers, but for yourself

Thank you for the story

arashi odoriko

First, thank you so very much for a delightful read. I must say it was rather difficult to stop reading once I started and from beginning to end I greatly enjoyed reading each chapter for this particular fanfiction of yours. I thought it was quite creative and one of the more unique stories here for the Inuyasha world of fiction. I do so like to see author's thinking outside the box when it comes to plot, which you did very well in a way that made me want to read more. I certainly look forward to where you next decide to take your story. I also thought that each of Sesshomaru's son were very adorable and an endearing addition to Kagome's ever growing family. Second, your writing was exceedingly well done. It's was so nice to read a story that just flows without pause because of poor editor skills. Everything was near perfection and it was definitely a treat to read without problems appearing. Of course, you can always continue to edit however you wish, I just believe, in my opinion, that it's at that editing level where you can enjoy the story without issue. Very well done indeed. Third, although I noticed you haven't updated your story since 08 you still continue to write, did you by chance lose interest in this story? If so that's a shame, it has so much potential. And not that it's my place to say on what you should or shouldn't write, I just thought to ask if you would per chance decide to continue one day? I sincerely hope so. If not, I still enjoyed reading it all the same. Finally, I think your a very talented writer and I'm looking forward to reading some of your other work.

-Kotori-sama

ah... to be Kags!

Wow, I just finished reading almost all your stories. I love your style of writing. This story I remember reading some time ago. I'm sad to see that you haven't updated it. I really like it.

this is a great story hope you finish it thank you

I just want to say that I have read almost every one of your Sesshomaru/Kagome pairings. This is by far the BEST fanfic featuring this couple that I have ever read. I really loved "The Syndrome" as well. I am eagerly awaiting new chapters to both, and I would just like to say that you are an amazing writer. I hope that all of the things that have been troubling you in RL settle down soon, know that your gifted storytelling is missed!

5 out of 5 stars for you!