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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad. But could use a little editing. For one, the name is Miroku, not Meroku. And I do believe that Kikyo shoots scared arrows, not secret arrows. Other than little things like that, pretty good start. Keep going.