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Why did you kill Kagome? Oh well, it's not my story.

So, I'm somewhat new to this site too, so don't feel bad about it. The only advice I can give is "Write what you think is right."

Hey, I just got that pun.*laughs some* That's kinda funny.

PLEASE CONTINUE TO UPDATE THIS STORY! Some people start a story, then go for over a year without updating.

I gotta go, later.

Wow, that's an excellent start and-- I can't wait to see more. I love your style.

nice start. i don't mind but don't be disappointed if others say anything about it being a bit tame for this site. your writing is eloquent, description and portrayal of his grief was done well.

I like chapter one. Please update soon. ;)

I enjoyed it alot. Hope you find the time to update very soon. Welcome to the site!

Very nice start!
Good characterization, a story with excellent potential!
I eagerly await more.