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January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful second part. I love how you got Sesshoumaru's name. It's sad to see his mom die, and I'm somewhat disappointed that he didn't go off and kill the guard but no worries, I killed him off in my head, lol. Wonderfully written though. I'm excited to read more of what you have in store for this story. It's very interesting, and it's a breath of fresh air so far. Hope you keep up the good work. ^-^ Until next time
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I'm curious to see more of this story. Good job and can't wait for the rest. ^-^
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's very interesting so far, I can't wait to see the next chapter. Update soon, okay.
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January 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an intriguing story. I like the premise so far. To think that Sesshomaru didn't come from the legal union of his parents, even in demon society, is strange. I reserve judgment. I would like to read more. Please update soon. DLS
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice start.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really good start. I can't wait to read what happens next, so update soon! B reading U!
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooooooow YEAAAAAAAAAA!!!! GREAT START!!! TOTALLY LOOKING FORWARD TO THIS STORY!