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please please please continue

Definitely can't wait for more. I was bummed that we didn't get an update on Sesshomaru and Kagome.

oh... my... gosh... there isnt anymore to read.. whyyyy??? please write more fast??!! plz?? i give u cookie!! i give u all my cookies!! for ever and a lifetime!! ever and ever and ever and ever- endless amounts of cookies!! oo so u said naraku doesnt rape her, thats good but i think i'd rather see her raped then the torture.. it makes me sad to see her all beat up.. poor sesshomaru... *sniff* i feel so bad for him.. he's my favorite inu yasha char anyway so to see him all messed up really hurts.. how about u?? hmm.. do u read ur own stories, like read them like its not ur own story? its a good technique to really good writing. but anyway- this is sooooooooooooo good right now. i cant wait for u to write more!!

forever loving and whacky-
Tori

p.s. dont forget- COOKIES!!!!!

I like this story, but it just seems to be dragging on and on. I mean, Inuyasha is searching to save her, Kagome is being tortured a lot, Sesshoumaru helps her out even though he does not understand why. It is getting a little repetitive. I want something to happen. I mean, when are they finally going to escape? Or when is Sesshoumaru going to have something with Kagome? I just want something new and interesting to happen! :) I do like the story though.

First of all, I have really enjoyed your story so far and look forward to reading to the end, so thank you for the entertainment =]

I've read some of the side notes you have here and there and wanted to voice my opinion. I thought, a few chapters ago, that it was silly for you to have to convince people of your intentions with rape or lack thereof. Although I do not agree with rape, all things happen for a reason and if you have a reason for that in YOUR story, so be it. It's your fanfiction, your mind, your creative rights and you are entitled to them. As for your English, or the word choice that I read you apologizing for, once again, do not feel remorse, people should not be so rude as to give you a hard time for it. Everyone writes differently and your word choice is just that, your choice. =] I enjoy every second of this fic, and I just hate to see writers who are sharing their creativity with the world put down in any way. So, definitely keep up the writing, but remember to always keep your head up and never feel less than you are!!!!!

whyyyyyyyy wont you update? this is a great story and its torture that you haven't updated it. Please i beg of you update. i need to read the ending please pretty please. you must update or do something!!

Please update ASAP.

Poor Kagome, but thank goodness she realized what was going on. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read about Sesshoumaru again. =)

I knew something was off. I guess Naraku is just going to keep on trying to trick his way into Kagome's knickers.

Wow! That is all I can say. Wow! Please keep the updates comming!